My Love

My Love
Written by Adam M. Snow

Time passes as night blooms,
again, I'm left to ponder.
The stars’ weeps,
but still I wonder,
“What have become of me?”

It is but convalescence I seek,
healing of this broken heart.
But my future's bleak
without a love of my own.

Where is she, my love,
the bearer of my heart;
the one to save me
from this world apart,
my life?

Am I not worthy
for this thing called 'love?'
Why does it elude me
this thing called 'my love?'

If I'm not meant to love
then let me be.
Let me wallow
in my self-pity.

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Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

I've felt like this many a time, unworthy and unwanted in love, a feeling of such destitute and sad! I think it would be so nice sometimes to feel part of a team setting and achieving goals together, going travelling or just re -arranging home or decorating etc having a best friend would be so nice to live in harmony with some significant other but I've now been on my own so long..i don't know how I'd cope or trust another to share my proximity with. ..I'm really not looking for love now but a nice friendship would be good, ! Thought provoking well written poem, !

[T.W. Early]

I really like poems about love, there is always so much to say. Whether it be unrequited or mutual, hopeful or sad. Good poem!

[Immortal1967]

The longing search for meaningful love..so much pain felt in this. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the old saying. Love come when love want. We have no control over love.
"Am I not worthy
for this thing called 'love?'
Why does it elude me
this thing called 'my love?'"
I liked the above lines. Today world. People afraid to commit. Love should be slow and easy. A sad ending to the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Barbara Walker]

This is beautiful and so honest. A little editing needs done but the core poem and all is great

[PhoenixDown]

A simple thing, which many seem to have a difficult time doing. Well done, new-friend. I appreciate such polished works. Thank you very much for the add. You have caught my attention.

[Adam M. Snow]

You're welcome and I look forward to reading your works

[Dhaye]

If only love can make us complete, we should start loving ourselves. By then, our eyes will be clearer to see what and who really worth our heart.
Love comes the least you expect it.
This is well-written. Keep writing.

[Rachael Lea]

I love this. It is beautifully written in a way that engages the readers mind. Very well done.

[Shannon]

I really enjoy the balance here. You use both simple and complex words, so it sounds beautiful, not pretentious.

[wordman]

we often ponder why and why not in our lives,we feel inadequate
we ask all the questions with hardly a real answer