Weeping by the Willow Tree

Weeping by the Willow Tree

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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Who is she adorned in moonlight's veil - This beauty with skin so fragile and pale? I see her within a dream surreal, Weeping by the willow tree.

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Weeping by the Willow Tree
Written by Adam M. Snow

Who is she adorned in moonlight's veil -

 This beauty with skin so fragile and pale?

 I see her within a dream surreal,

 Weeping by the willow tree.

 

 Why does she weep such a woe,

 Under starry midnight glow?

 Upon the ground, her tears will flow;

 Weeping by the willow tree.

 

 How can I clearly see?

 She weeps so tenderly...

 Will I come to know; can it be,

 She weeps for me by the willow tree?

 

 What can cause her broken heart,

 That led this dame to hurt?

 Her hair does fairly touch the dirt;

 Weeping by the willow tree.

 

 A love that's lost should only be,

 Misinterpreted reality,

 For she will never be set free,

 Weeping by the willow tree.

 

 A heart's amiss if love is lost -

 An empty bliss would be the cost.

 A troubled dream, she would exhaust �"

 Weeping by the willow tree.

 

 Every which way the wind would blow,

 The rustling leaves, the willow'd throw.

 Akin to willows weep, we know!

 She weeps by the willow tree.

 

 Is she an angel kneeling there?

 What is her burden that she bear?

 Certainly there is such grief in the air,

 Away by the olden willow tree.

 

She veils her face with waterfall tears,

Misery held her all these years.

Still she, with tender hopes and fears,

weeps by the willow tree.

 

The willow tree leaves would sway,

As she, on her knees would pray.

Every night and every day,

She weeps by the willow tree.

 

Standing afar, I thought of her

Just a dame, as if it were -

A memory cast a blur,

A passing wind through the willow tree.

 

She wears such woe, what holds her dear...

Amidst these trials of heartache and fear?

Upon the morn, my eyes came clear -

Reason why she weeps by the willow tree.

 

 Alas! It is that she cries for me;

 It twas I who caused her such sweet misery.

 I hear her cries, her plea,

 Underneath the willow tree.

 

 I oft wonder what I did to she,

 And wonder why she weeps for me.

 In the night I hear the keys -

 While she weeps under the willow tree.

 

 Upon the morn, it occurred to me,

 That maiden cries out of love for me.

 And I simply walked past her plea,

 Not knowing what causes her to weep,

 Silently under the willow tree.

 

 The succeeding night I went to see,

 That beautiful girl who sits under the tree.

 I saw her there, but in despair -

 She hangs from two branches bare.

 Swinging under the willow tree.


© 2016 Adam M. Snow


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An amazing and wonderful poem, that moves so slowly through the days of her weeping, it could be a month of seeing her weep, before the dawning realization comes. The flow is beautiful and has such a classical ring to it, like satin or silk cloth in rich colors. I love the repetition of the last line, until it begins to change, at the same time that the voice changes, and the story moves on. The last stanza is profoundly sad, but absolutely perfect. A wondrous piece of art. Thank you.

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Lovely, I also enjoyed the deletion of "the willow tree ". I thought this had a great rythm to it. Very nice !

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
What a perfectly written so well articulated of a ghost of a girl under a willow tree. Beautiful work Thanks Cherry for the request

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andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

A lovely write just read this poem again by request:)
You have a gift, and I hope to read many more of your works!!

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very well done...excellent rhyme, rhythm, execution (so to speak... ;-))

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I really like the repetition of the willow tree. Repetitiveness in a poems does not always work but sublime in this writing.

I have a few suggestions:

Why does she weep such a woe, --I might change the word "woe"

That led this dame to hurt? ---I would definitely take out the word dame it seems to cheapen this poor girl.

What is her burden that she bear? --what is the burden she bears

This is going in my library and I hope the suggestions help

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Gee
Great read Adam one to be admired and envied

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is absolutely incredible!! I'm so jealous, it speaks with such hurt and pain. I had goosebumps reading the whole time!! this is gorgeous!! Very well done!!

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Talk about poetry, wow. You've got incredible skills with a pen. Excellent writing.

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Why thank you :)
This is a really beautiful piece. Full of emotions. I really enjoyed it.

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I rarely like poems written in meter with rhyme, i feel it to be old fashioned, but that's part of the beauty of this. It could never have been written without it's beautiful structure. Very very well done!! A beautiful work!

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Adam M. Snow

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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