Whispers in the Wind

Whispers in the Wind
Written by Adam M. Snow

Entrance me with your tune,
that gentle voice of yours.
Those sway ardent winds of harmony,
an echoed symphony of your life;
each word is wrapped in rhapsody,
flowing with the wind.

Your gentle voice, a breeze;
your whisper -- so angelically,
echoes throughout the world.
I hear it among the wind.
I hear it over the thunder of my beating heart.
I hear it calling to me.

We travel separate roads of life,
I got lost a time or two -- perhaps more.
Your voice helped me along the way;
your whispers in the wind,
echoes of sweet harmony,
it guided me back to you.

I want to hear it once more,
the melody of your voice.
Let it get lost among the wind;
(that sway ardent winds of harmony)
and have it find the heart within my ear.

Let your words etch itself upon my beating heart,
let them live forever upon my heart,
its beats won't fade the memory,
of what you've left in me.
Let them breath through my lungs.
Let me inhale your love;
it's sweet nectar to my soul,
an aroma sweet.

I hear it within a dream;
it brings me peace;
that caring voice of yours.
A stage whisper in the wind;
that soothing beat -- an interval,
an echoed symphony among the wind.

Those treacherous words of love,
"I do" and "love you"
forever in my mind,
forever in my heart.
Forever lingering on -- a song;
your whisper in the wind,
an echo -- a sweet echo.
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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Nightfeather]

This is one of the most epic and brilliance poem I've read in my life. You just went to a new depth of poetry, for this poem was really groundbreaking. The flow was so mysterious but also calm and sweet. This is one of a kind and a true masterpiece. This poem deserves more recognition.

Good job :D

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Nightfeather]

No problem. You and your awesome poems deserve it :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

A beautiful poem with real depth and a wisp-fullness , an epic piece . Love it !

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"its beats won't fade the memory,
of what you've left in me."

Very deep lines here: hearts will never stop beating, so it's always good to have "signed names" upon them.

[MOON]

Beautifully written Adam with such depth , lyrical.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much

[TL Boehm]

a sublime write, a heart song, yet there is that tinge of forlorn-ness - a wistfulness.
Well done

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you

[MoriartyMesa]

Adam, what I always enjoy about your work is that it can be set to any time or period. In the first few lines it felt like with was something near ancient Greek in the style of Homer than changed in a Andy Warhol manner and to something modern and went back again with a nice Regency style.


Loved it

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you for your kind words, I am honored you enjoyed it

[Cody Williams]

Amazing write Adam! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Adam M. Snow]

Anytime and thank you

[John Anderson]

You write with such depth and conviction my friend. This is an amazing piece. Kudos to you!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry my friend. I like the flow of the poem for love. The gentle and sweet voices in our life. Leave us with the want to hear their voices again. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you Coyote, for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.