Winter Moon through a Third Eye

 

 

 

Winter Moon through a Third Eye
By: Adam M. Snow

 

Staring out the frosted glass,
I ponder there, alone.
The moon, at its fullest, its highest peak,
all I can think of are words.

 

Words flowing off that fullest moon,
being born from my ink stained pen.
I write those words upon the page;
my heart flowing with the ink.

 

The soon winter night inspires me.
Staring out the frosted glass:
I glimpse eternity.

 

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Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

A heart-felt piece. You take the reader on your journey here....and for me, it's something I have experienced myself....looking at the moon for inspiration or to get things in perspective...
We are alone, and yet, looking at the moon, we can realise that somehow, we're not.....
thanks for sharing....
BB

[TL Boehm]

that last stanza is especially strong. the frosted glass and considering eternity. Beautiful poem

[Kate Henderson]

The moon is such an inspiration to all writers. Fantastic poem :)

[marie]

reminds me of my own midnight thoughts, love how you drew the parallel between the night sky and eternity, beautiful wording:)

[SheDreamsInTheSun]

I loved it, I could really picture the writer writing under the moons light. Fantastic job.

[Alanna Nox]

This is very expressing, being a teenage girl myself, this speaks to me. Fantastic job. :)

~Nox

[MoriartyMesa]

Well let me tell you my son, I loved this, it was Winter and Romance all in one. The Irish Side of me loved this and the wording and passing is perfect.

[Mark]

Very nice imagery. I love winter, especially viewed through a frosted window! I like this.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Enjoyed the picture and the imagery within the words of the poem itself. The way the moon can light up inspiration with it's beauty... lovely write.

[Muse]

I agree with Chris, this is exceptional. I love the picture, and the imagery you painted with your words is just brilliant!