The Flowing of Dulcet Melody

The Flowing of Dulcet Melody

By: Adam M. Snow

 

How sweet it is the swaying of dulcet melody,
only a profound sound like wind to the trees.
A beginning for what was the end;
a music, that does ascend.

 

It finds the heart and proudly gives in,
to ignore this sweet melody, it would be a sin.
Such peace that comes from dulcet melody,
from a note of an offset key.

 

It sways with a sound, a beauty to be heard-
like the voice of the morning bird.
How sweet it is, that I bear witness-
a profound sound swaying with a kiss.

Author's Note

I might add on to this poem, I haven't decided. What do you think?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, seems like it could sway either way with being finished or having more to it. I like this line:
"from a note of an offset key."

[TL Boehm]

I think it is lovely just the way it is - it sounds "complete" but if you add to it I'm sure it will be just as wonderful as it is now

[J. Kell]

I agree with some of the other commentators Adam, this was beautiful but it seems like you have more to say.

[Clara]

So very pretty write.
However, I found myself wanting to read more.

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Music is instilled in each movement of the universe......"It finds the heart and proudly gives in,
to ignore this sweet melody, it would be a sin."- A new dimension of sin, I never dared even to think of......The image also is nice....very good work

[Mark]

Very nice. As for adding , if there is more to say add. If its just repetition of expressed thoughts, restrain.

[DJ]

I enjoyed reading this. Romantic undertones related well to melody and music of life and of our souls. It is nice how it is, but I feel it lingers at the end a bit, teasing the reader, perhaps not quite finished. Thank you for the read my friend.

[NA]

Oh so very beautiful...enjoyed :) x

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much for your review.

[Rita L. Sev]

A romantic piece that flows beautifully. Nicely done, Adam!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much for your review.