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I have seen Maelstroms Eternal
By: Adam M. Snow

I write with flowers of ink,
thy love poured out on page,
in a slumbering alder away in endless flight;
swaying with the stars, so white

'gainst the black night sky.
Facing the horizons, on the calm black waters called -ink.
-I write for thee that thy heart be free.
I have seen maelstroms eternal,
mount in my soul but endless;
-An abyss without thee, I dare thee not.
By starlight the rushes lean over thee wide:
-The ink on the page is erased,
-The text is long forgotten. 

 

http://amsnow.webstarts.com

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

I Love this Poem! thanks for the rec to read!

[Jazique]

As an artists I was first attacted b the picture but, it was poem that kept me here. Well done, with every word different from the last and written so well and done in your own unique way.

[DJ]

A classic piece, I don't usually enjoy poetry with old english language used, but this was nicely written. Good on ya!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A classic piece again my darling you are a master!

[Mark]

Very classic. I see two rather disparate ideas flowing here, one of love, one of writing. Like an egg within an egg.

[Clara]

I love the classical style of this, and the words are so beautiful and descriptive.
Well-penned, my friend. :)

[NA]

wow...this was hauntingly beautiful...really enjoyed :) x

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much

[J. Kell]

Lovely poem -" I write for thee that thy heart be free." I love this line it has an beautiful simple rhyme to it. Thanks for sharing!

[Adam M. Snow]

Glad you enjoyed it

[Adam M. Snow]

Powerful piece my friend, there is nothing more beautiful than you showing your message, for the one you wrote it for here, again, you almost bring me tears... fantastic wording. It's so good you're back, and I can read you again.

- Elisa

[Adam M. Snow]

I am glad you enjoyed this and again, thank you for your kind review

Anytime my friend!

[Ken Simm.]

This is a prayer. Beautifully constructed and I am impressed beyond measure.