The Fruits of Insanity

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Fruits of Insanity
By: Adam M. Snow

 

Take a peek within my mind,
taste the fruit of insanity.
A dreamless abyss of my dark fantasy,
where this fruit dost grow
upon a gallows tree.

 

Where I lay, slumbering away;
lost to my own world of insanity.
I am my own dream
falling upon time itself;
fluttering away like murder of crows,
into the blood red dusk,
spreading wings to grow.

 

To be sane is to be insane,
they are one,
an endless cycle;
as I am two but one.

 

So I say, "Take a bite upon this fruit,
free your mind to a dream;
a forever fantasy,
within my insanity."

 

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Reviews

[J. Kell]

Love your lines "taste the fruit of my insanity, a dreamless abyss of my dark fantasy, where this fruit dost grow upon a gallows tree." Fantastically haunting. Thank you!

[Friday]

The line is thin at times, yes. Beautiful flow and wording. Thanks!

[TL Boehm]

I am my own dream
falling upon time itself;

Sometimes I think sanity is relative. Wonderful poem

[Dalebear]

we all can have a dark part of our mind good write

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. When you dance with insanity. Easy to add other folks to the craziness.
"To be sane is to be insane,
they are one,
an endless cycle;
as I am two but one. "
Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem. Above lines were my favorite.
Coyote

[Renée]

dark.. yet a part of all our minds... love this Adam !!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A guided and medative piece that relates well to the reader, well doen, good read.

[MoriartyMesa]

***Slaps his hands together**** Alright, here is my view and keep in mind i am just a dude, there is pain, but pride, an awesome pride that needs to break out.


But thats just my thinkin

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Brilliant write. Thanks for sharing Adam :)

[marie]

wow... this captured me from the very beginning, the first stanza caught me and still at this moment remains the best of the piece:) the flow reminded me of a trickling stream, powerfully there, but whispered so you can't pull away. this was... just wow...:) great job snow:) it was amazing:)