Milady of the Sea

Milady of the Sea
By: Adam M. Snow

Beauty engulfs her extravagant being,
Cursing me silent; without thought, without seeing.
Being as it may be, a bewitching beauty,
Leaving me speechless and lost in dreams.
Her sweet melody calling, drowning me-
Depths of despair; my home, my sea.
Echoing of tunes, O' sweet melody;
Beauty half that of piscine.
The moon itself glistens for her,
It dances around her angelic sound.
Entrap me, O' milady of the sea-
Take I with thee sweet melody.
The great blue we go forth, endeavor and so forth;
Lost to the sweet sound sung forever.
The cascading ray ignites her beauty,
Reflections go forth from the sea.
I met her eyes for moment still,
Her melody fallen my heart to ill.
How it's so I, lost in thoughts thought of her-
Milady or not, forevermore dream of her?

Reviews

[pasdepoisson]

Quite beautiful and classical, a different take on the "my love is as deep as the deep blue sea"-type lines.

With as lines as sparkling as "her extravagant being", however, I find "The great blue we go forth, endeavor and so forth" a bit of a mood killer, however. "Go forth," yes! "And so forth," though, I think is a little perfunctory for the extraordinary vision you've created.

Oh, BTW, great play on "milady" and "malady". Never saw that one coming.

[Adam M. Snow]

Funny thing about 'malady' it was supposed to be 'milady' yet I didn't realize that typo.... I wrote this poem on my phone and according to my phone's auto correct, 'milady' isn't a word thus it constantly changes it to 'malady' lol

[Brianna Brie]

I believe in her magic. I need to read you more often: you are amazing in whatever subject you choose. Ah, I miss the days that I wrote of love. Perhaps, one day another will inspire me so.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Renée]

Gorgeous visions dance as I read Adam ! Well Done !

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Renée]

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[saroosh]

pretty good work

[Nr. Nine]

this is a very good writing. I love your writings

Nr. Nine

[RJ620Win]

i felt the heart and soul of this piece. it keeps me reminding of one of a part of my past. :) keep it up!

[WingsToFly]

amazing write. Really beautiful.

[Frieda P]

This danced right into my heart and imagination, mystical and a delight to read, like this one a lot.

[Aeneas Barton]

This is one of your better works if you as me. What inspired it?

[Adam M. Snow]

The mythical creatures Sirens

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Coral royals always are elusive and in their pursuit have wanderingly lost to generations of surface-dwellers many a great surface blue-bloods.
Seasickness is of no great consequence to the one who lives in the arms of the Sun and remembers he is found by circumstances only to be lost again in the sea of humanity.
thanku

[Adam M. Snow]

And thanks for your kind comment

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I will confess....just as i was opening your poem-page...this one...there was a young kid on my right and a young girl on my left....we were in the cyber-cafe and they were playing games...well your image just popped up this woman in the sea...and just then this girl in her early teens saw my monitor and made a face at me...well i wished i was in the deep sea myself then....so i hastily scrolled down to the text of your poem....the image hid on top...and wrote thi s previous review wigich i felt in the embarassing moment...half of it of course nonsense as it may seem to anyone...but it was part of the mement of trying to read ur work, get of the hell of that place and try to stick there as if nothing had happened...so im sitting on the other side of the wall now...and hope she doesnt come this side again today also...