Bleeding Ink

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bleeding Ink
By: Adam M. Snow

 

I lay naked, bleeding ink
with pages of forbidden text;
but though I'm ill yet cannot blink,
you mockery tongue had perplexed.

 

I clinched my fist;
the remains of my heart cries out,
"I may no longer exist!"
with my raging voice I shout.

 

Your blasphemy you had spoke,
shattered my bearing soul;
and by your voice my heart broke,
and it is my heart that which you stole.

 

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Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I can really hear the Shakespearean element in this one...nice work^^

[Anonymous Girl]

Aww... Soo sad!! But I like it. Really nice!
100/100

[Baby Ricochet]

OOH, Good one

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words were amazing. A shattered heart will bleed ink. A writer can escape to the pen and their thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Refined Poet]

oh my... such a forceful and oddly haunting write. well done.

[MoriartyMesa]

Part of me wonders if this was a writers character, demanding life. Nice job