A Midnight Summer's Rain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Midnight Summer's Rain
By: Adam M. Snow

 

Rain pounding 'gainst my window;
the sound of thunder, wind blow.
Flashes of lightning, silhouettes of shadows;
a nature’s melody for me to dance to.

 

My face drips wet by mid-summer's rain;
I spin with the wind, emotionally sane.
Roaring thunder race a crackling smash,
still I dance on; no care, no care.
Throughout the night, the storm rages still,
and I left to watch this mid-summer's thrill.

Author's Note

I wrote this around 1 or 2:00 in the morning during a thunder storm.

Reviews

[Allyson Wolfe]

The rhyme scheme is interesting. It doesn't seem to have a real pattern yet it does. It's a thrilling description of the possibilities that rain can offer! Rain is not a mere inconvenience, instead it is the emotion of the sky. I love this!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Really lovely work there's nothing at all i can find wrong in the least. Its just a very nice and descriptive work. The only thing is that I think the picture overwhelms the poem so just work on your artistic porportions :-)

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I love this piece. It literally rains down with both honesty and imagery. Great job, Adam.

[The Refined Poet]

This is beautiful!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

So beautiful and very well written.
100/100

[Heather]

well done, the rain is very inspirational.. love dancing it it!

[Mockingbird]

this is a stunning spur of the moment piece. excellent imagery, makes the rain palpable.

[afra]

wow so beautiful ....i love rain ....well done

[kublakhan27]

Great piece...captures the carefree mood a thunderstorm can sometimes bring.

[sharonlee]

What fun... very groovy write.