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Mute
By: Adam M. Snow

 

Armed with a tongue, I dare not speak;
my voice alone is why I'm weak.
I ripped it out to hurt no more,
silent now forevermore.

Reviews

[Allyson Wolfe]

Almost Poe-like with the rhymes and elusive writing. I loved it!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Dove]

This was short but theres something about it that really appealed to me. This is a beautiful poem, great job!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Dove]

You're Welcome

[luvingu01]

beatiful..charming..transcending...allure

just beautiful

[MOON]

Poignant, the fear of hurting others with your words.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haunting piece. The simplicity of it really adds a layer of mystery to the reader because we have to think what this person has done and or seen to feel this way. Brilliant! 100:)
God bless
~Mickey

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem

[Crazy Cat Man]

powerful and short. i was just thinking about the communist party in central and south america. if u speak out against it your dead. great piece

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Powerful, and right to the poibt. Great job, Adam.

[.]

*point lol

[kublakhan27]

A lifetime's worth of possibilities in these four lines...less is certainly more in the case of this poem.

[The Analog Kid]

Our words can injure beyond belief. Short and powerful.

[Rhianne Ney]

I can relate to it because I always have wrong choice of words sometimes that it hurts other people... That's why sometimes I stay silent so not to hurt anyone...My greatest fear is to be hated just like everyone else...
Good poem as ever (: