A Teasing Storm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Teasing Storm
By: Adam M. Snow

 

I watch from the distance, as the storm covers me;
pouring it's dreadful rain as the dust blinds me.
I look in awe and disgrace of the thundering clouds,
as the storm covered plain with a pouring rain shrouds.
Flash after flash would race across the sky,
beauty of lights would chase the clouds floating by.
The roaring songs of the wind bristling through the trees,
would be enough to put even myself at ease;
but no, this storm did not cover me,
just a tease floating by for me to see.

Reviews

[Heather]

I used to live in the desert and you could watch storms from the far off distance, this poem reminded me of that. Good write!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[VelvetRosetta]

Touching, though I am not fond of thunder and lightening, your words put me to ease...lovely piece!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Jetta Zippora]

So gorgeous. Your writing is always epic and vivid, friend. I love it.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so

[MOON]

Yes when you safe storms fascinating to watch and sometimes the drama of it too quickly over.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love storms and hate it when they pass by withing a matter for minutes. This poem captures that thought clearly and you can feel the disappointment.

[Baby Ricochet]

Cool poem. THanx

[kublakhan27]

Electrical storms are actually a major fascination of mine, in a sense that something can be so beautiful and potentially devastating at the same time. I've mentioned elsewhere that it's almost like nature warning us that there can be no true comprehension of good without a true acknowledgement of evil. Needless to say, this is one of my favourite pieces from your catalogue.

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you

[kublakhan27]

No problem^^

[afra]

wow very dark and deep..well done

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the statue in the photo. Thunder and Iwo Jima. Two great storms in the same photos. Words and photo were outstanding.
Coyote

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Anonymous Girl]

That's so natural. Wonderful ^.^

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Anonymous Girl]

No problem ^.^