A Teasing Storm

A Teasing Storm

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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I watch from the distance, as the storm covers me; pouring it's dreadful rain as the dust blinds me. I look in awe and disgrace of the thundering clouds,

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A Teasing Storm
By: Adam M. Snow

 

I watch from the distance, as the storm covers me;
pouring it's dreadful rain as the dust blinds me.
I look in awe and disgrace of the thundering clouds,
as the storm covered plain with a pouring rain shrouds.
Flash after flash would race across the sky,
beauty of lights would chase the clouds floating by.
The roaring songs of the wind bristling through the trees,
would be enough to put even myself at ease;
but no, this storm did not cover me,
just a tease floating by for me to see.

© 2012 Adam M. Snow


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I feel like we experienced the same storm... Denton I presume?... :) None the less you have great focus on the subject matter at hand here, I would say spice it up a bit and draw some cross references into the piece or future poems tell me what you see with out telling me what it is, add some mystery to keep me intrigued.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very descriptive ! reminds me of the storms at the river..taunting teasing never producing the cooling rain I desire !

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice descriptive view of nature though it can be allegorical in nature and create a certain imagery as to life and it's emotional hardships. As we here in Miami are expecting a Hurricane, I hope it passes over us much like your "tease"

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this poem. Very beautifully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Adam M. Snow

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Nice description of what it's like to stand back and watch figuratively. The short form worked well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this is a brilliant line >>> The roaring songs of the wind bristling through the trees,

I can just see it as you describe and the word 'bristling' is a brilliant word choice.

The whole poem is strongly observed and evocative with a strong sense of relief at missing the worst of what life has to throw at us, for now at least.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Wishful thinking? Maybe not.. Or is it a thought in terms of what you would like to happen rather than being realistic and giving a true assessment of a situation based upon the facts you saw? Either way, the poem is fantastic, it challenged my thinking though I don't like storms and lightnings:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so amazing, I can really imagine the storm.
Excellent poem!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's a great poem talking about a storm which is not figuratively real... I like your poems and the way you write them very expressive (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


I too have wistnesed that but ih how much better the storm is when finally she lets go. What a rush... Very good write.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam M. Snow

12 Years Ago

Thank you
realmwriter

12 Years Ago

You're most welcome.

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Adam M. Snow

Phoenix , AZ



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