Caress the name of your angel that fallen, It flows the wind, a ragweed pollen. Only you can hear it's torment calling;
Caressing Angel By: Adam M. Snow
Caress the name of your angel that fallen, It flows the wind, a ragweed pollen. Only you can hear it's torment calling; Open thy ears to it's ever falling song. A melody which poison thy voice and heart. Only to tear thy soul apart. Listen to your siren song, Awaken your soul to which it belongs.
I like the mixture of fallen angels and sirens in this poem - the former flawed celestial creature that either should be pitied or scorned and feared like the sirens that lure men to their deaths. But even if a song seems to draw you near danger for your soul and heart - like love for instance lets you risk a broken heart - at times it is worth it. Great poem!
Ahh sometime.we.want.what we can't or should not have. Fallen angels are always difficult to obtain but if you find yours hold them dear for you may not get a second chance. Just my thoughts on this piece. Might be way off base here.
I honestly loved the first few lines of this...its what made this piece stand out. I love dark writings mixed with angels and music...They seem to go well together.
"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow
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