The tree in my Backyard

The tree in my Backyard

A Poem by Snivy12345
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I wrote this in my creative writing class. All reviews and critiques are encouraged. Thank you.

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Slowly falling, softly falling, 
My children dance magically to the ground 
From my ancient arms. 
Regardless of reason, 
The cycle repeats 

He again is drawing, writing, 
Drowning out the world with his music, 
Going as far as to just gaze, 
Staring past me and himself. 

The cycle repeats. 

Every time, sadness, anger, depression, and anxiety 
Are the auras I feel. 
No joy… no joy. 
I wonder if he knows 
I sense his pain. 

The backyard door opens again, 
his notebook clutched, 

The cycle begins. 

His sigh, audible. 
His pain, shared. 

SNAP! 
The pencil in his tense hands breaks, 
The force of the anger 
Flowing through the wood 
And onto the abused paper laying in his lap. 

Staring blankly at the sight, 
The tension in the air thicker than molasses, 
One of my leaves fall, 
Reaching out to a clutched hand. 

The boy glances at it, 
His demeanour shifting to a half smile. 
“Thank you...” 

He rises, 
Brushing himself off softly 
Before walking back inside. 
He knew all along. 
The cycle ends. 

© 2016 Snivy12345


Author's Note

Snivy12345
Please, feedback is welcome. I would like to know what I can improve on.

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Added on October 7, 2016
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