Desperation

Try as I may I can not let go
Fighting everyday to keep my sanity
Desperation consumes me
Cant die
Cant escape what troubles me
Pain bleeds from me
Pull the trigger

Reviews

[Pawprints]

If i were to be talking when I read this poem, I would've ended the sentence with a yelp. Startling, but that's a whole other level to this.

[Fang]

i like this poem it has pain in it and i like pain, good work keep it up