Thunder

I heard a thunder rumble
And immediately thought of the
Girl who passed by my window
Some time ago.

I thought to myself,
Hope she's safe
And sound
In her home by now.

She probably didnt even see me.
Closing the curtains standing behind them,
Like a creep.

She probably has no idea someone
Thought of her
Hearing a thunder.

Someone wrote a few words even.
Life is strange.
People are complex.

One minute you think no one
Cares about you.
Next minute you think
Of a random stranger
And wish for their wellness.

Author's Note

I am not a writer or a poet. Sometimes I scribble. And here's one such scribble.

Reviews

[robert harris jr]

very nice poem shows that we are still human beings

[Mayflower]

Thank you! Appreciate it :)

[Dreamer]

I really like this! I always think about how interesting and baffling it is that each and every person on this earth has something going on in their life. Each person has their own hopes, dreams, plans, goals, and loves. I think it is also really interesting how our focus in life can change so much even from day to day. One day, I am stressed thinking about all the things I need to do that day, and the next, I am thinking about the importance of living in the moment. Next thing you know, all that matters is the love that I give to others. Life can really be a rollercoaster. Thank you for sharing!

[Mayflower]

Thank you! Exactly, life is unpredictable. All we can do is stop and take a breath and notice the little things around us sometimes. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a review :)

[rafaelcorreia_aa]

That was so... Human, truly what we've been needing as a species, harmony and care, thank you for existing, thank you for writing about that girl, and most importantly, thank you for allowing us to read this scribble as you called it :)

[Mayflower]

Thank you for reading my scribble and your kind words :) Appreciate it!

[Chris Shaw]

This poem tells me what a caring person you are. Concerned about the welfare of another human being that you don’t even know. You show your compassion here. I like that. Thanks for sharing.

[Mayflower]

Thank you, Chris! Means a lot :)

[Dave W.]

I liked your scribble, I do these kinds of things all the time, little prayers for passers by or an ambulance in the distance, just caring for fellow humans, we all need each other.

[Mayflower]

Thank you Dave for the review! People who pray for strangers without expecting anything in return are my favorite kind of people.

[Dave W.]

We just need alot more compassion for each other