My love refused.

My love refused.

A Poem by Sneha R

And this is hardly surprising when the expressions and the meanings have become obsolete.
The soul's escaping, through this hole that is gaping. Lonely roads, god only knows.

Sometimes love is not enough and the road gets tough.
I'm not fazed,nor startled ,but what did i just do? I'm amazed ,damn.

Oh yes i just staggered back against the rail and toppled over.
The sky darkens, my life flashes, probably I was supposed to be on crashes or burned to ashes.

It hinders me ,i was swooned ,every single time booed from the game ,where am i? I had oomph , and now doomed to failure.

Snap ,back to reality i feel confused,
Or i could be killed ,tortured at will ,my love refused.

© 2013 Sneha R


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Beautiful write. very interesting

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very interesting wording in this. I wasn't sure.. After reading it through several more times, I find I quite like it. :)

Rejection is always a difficult pill to swallow. Especially when we feel our hearts and intentions were in the right place.

I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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