My love refused.

And this is hardly surprising when the expressions and the meanings have become obsolete.
The soul's escaping, through this hole that is gaping. Lonely roads, god only knows.

Sometimes love is not enough and the road gets tough.
I'm not fazed,nor startled ,but what did i just do? I'm amazed ,damn.

Oh yes i just staggered back against the rail and toppled over.
The sky darkens, my life flashes, probably I was supposed to be on crashes or burned to ashes.

It hinders me ,i was swooned ,every single time booed from the game ,where am i? I had oomph , and now doomed to failure.

Snap ,back to reality i feel confused,
Or i could be killed ,tortured at will ,my love refused.

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I like the rather abstract imagery, the little tickles at the line ends. There is a devil-may-care attitude with the message but that gives it just a pinch of subtle horror and seasons the appeal. Well done! :)