Fantasy

I curse you,
Sometimes for snatching
The womanliness, I live with
My best mate resides under,
Squeals out for help!
Then, finally I ignore the shoutsz
Announce the mellow fame to the clouds !

Conclusively, I appear then
With new mood to set fallen
The mystery I admire
Still there, just require a little fire
Not to reach up and down
Or to please any hopeless frown
But, to go green with inner grass
And burn the fodder in my
Heart's empty vask!

Let me recharge
Let me experiment and witness large
So I can weave a flashy frock
And wrap my soul,
Fearlessly, dance on the floor,
With Alone and all!!

Author's Note

Hope you enjoyed :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i very much enjoyed...i saw a person who just has to recharge her batteries...she gets worn dancing so much...in other words, trying to please those around her who have expectations...she wants to dance alone for awhile...with none of those....free and easy....then she is willing to rejoin her life...and accept it for what it is.
j.

[Sneh]

Glad you enjoyed, and a perfect description Jacob :)
Thanks much!

[LylaCrystal]

Officially, my art bateries are fully charged after reading your poem! Good job, dear! :)

[Sneh]

Your review charged me... Thanks much 💞

[emipoemi]

.......to be honest, I'm a little confused with all the oddly placed commas and the possible incomplete imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed the message within the piece and the flow wasn't too shabby - Stanza 2 has superb sound work on top of that, even though the craft of it is a tad awkward. This requires a few tweaks to reach perfection, but it's a tremendous start. I'll grant you that.

[Abhishek Izy]

This is a very pleasant read. Absolutely loved it

[Sneh]

Thanks dear abhishek....! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear Sneh.
Let me recharge
"Let me experiment and witness large
So I can weave a flashy frock
And wrap my soul,
Fearlessly, dance on the floor,
With Alone and all!!"
I like the above lines. Hard to be brave, but we must. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sneh]

Thanks coyote for reading it and reflecting kind words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Esther]

This is really very beautiful!

[Sneh]

Thank you esther!!

[LitStar]

I admire the passion here

imagery set to pen like fire ablaze to countryside


striking

[Sneh]

Hey litstar, thanks much for the visit!

[LitStar]

you're very welcome

[barleygirl]

Like Wild Rose (another of your reviewers), I'm a straightforward person, so I'm not following all the whimsical nuances of your message. But I love that you use a ton of imagery to show details of how this fantasy might go. I cannot guess what these images convey, but I can see how your writing is thoughtfully crafted and it must refer to specific details for some unknown fantasy . . . and probably conjuring up an even wider range of ideas for other fantasizing readers! Your writing is lively & dynamic, which makes it fun to read (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sneh]

Thanks Margie! Hope you have a good day :)

[Taniska 😊€..]

I really enjoyed reading this poem. This young girl's fantasy is just amazing .keep writing( smiles). I am waiting for your next stuff .

[Sneh]

Thank you! :))

[Wild Rose]

Just I get mixed visions from this > but that's me > A simple person who needs help to follow your imagination > and young girls fantasies

[Sneh]

Anytime;)
Thanks for the read!