GOOD-BAD DAY

Reluctance?
Ah, not a chance!
The lies hold for long,
Becomes the truth,
As miseries do too!

Gaining in a game, conquering
Losing in a flame, loitering
the flimsy emotions
Not concerned though!

Say as chess, ludo,
War or any mess
Turns, bring hope, wish
Vibrance and positive essence!

My presence is full of importance
Irrespective of crowd,
Squealing and burning their own grass,
Leave at it, unless time will get pass!

It's like, choosing,
Lavender or musk,
Based on the pleasing sense,
Same as,
Cries or giggles,
When you set with enchanting grace!!!

Author's Note

Have a great day!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Good days, bad days we all have them regardless of the company we find ourselves in. I also got the feeling that the writer is strong minded and knows her worth and won't be swayed by the baying crowd. Interesting read Sneh. Happy New Year to you.

Chris

[Sneh]

Such reviews boost me up more and more.... Grateful that you took time to read my words.
Happy New Year Chris💓!!
Sneh

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Sneh.

[barleygirl]

Your first verse is a stunningly original way to re-craft the old adage: if you think it, so shall it be. I have been healing from a neck injury where I had to learn to walk again. Many times it felt like there would be no more progress, but even six years out, I'm getting back parts that haven't worked all this time. Your poem is an artful, enthusiastic way to say all things are possible, if we only believe (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sneh]

This made my day, really grateful and induced by your words.... Keep supporting !! thanks, With love :)
Sneh

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we fail to see things as they really are, we wish them a certain way and then believe they have magically turned into what we have wished....and then sometimes it just goes that everything has its opposite...and what goes up must come down, and vice-versa...
i like the juxtapositions in this...the conflict of feelings.

j.

[Sneh]

Thank you, Jacob for the read and encouraging review! Good wishes thine way :)

[Onlyme]

Good poem Sneh, confident and self-assured. Understands in life we all have good and bad days. and goes with the flow.

[Sneh]

I wish your good days defeat bad ones! Thank you so much! :)💐

[Onlyme]

And like wise Sneh, beautiful days ahead always for you too. Dawn.

[Robert Trakofler]

I like that last stanza a great deal it is a poem all in itself!!! This is one of those poems that must be spoken to catch its full spectrum and this writing is indeed a full spectrum. I enjoyed this:)

[Sneh]

Thanks much, you're appreciated!! :)

[Jade]

This is so very good and I really like this and your last stanza a lot, nicely written and expressed

[Sneh]

Means alot Brandie!
Thank you and have a beautiful day :))

[Amada]

This is amazing piece of writing. Sneh
Thanks for sharing.
Looking forward to read more

[Sneh]

Thank you very much for the visit ! :))

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting poem. We all have days when we're down, but friends can help you up c: I liked this poem!

[Sneh]

Yes friends can but I think self inducement is long term. Anyways, thanks for the visit, have a lovely day!! :))
Sneh

[Mrudula Rani]

Lies never become truth and sooner or later the house of cards people build comes down, because truth is eternal and lies change their shape often . Truth is God- Mahatma Gandhi.
" My presence is full of importance irrespective of crowd," speaks volumes about confidence. I hope you always be that assured of your importance! Wishing you all the best.

[Sneh]

indeed 'Truth is god' ,if it is chased....still many beliefs are hold as truth, who knows if they are or not.
thank you for taking time and putting contemplating review!
sneh

[Mrudula Rani]

You are welcome.

[bigfootprint]

A joyful distraction, Sneh. Your imagery is insightful, showing wisdom beyond your apparent years. There is a historical quote from a US admiral -- "Full speed ahead and damn the torpedoes." David Glasgow Farragut would be proud of you, too.

[Sneh]

Thank you so much Mr. Fowler!!
your thoughtful review has soared my spirit a bit more.....have a bliss filled day! c:

[Mitchell J.U.]

"The lies hold for long,
Becomes the truth,
As miseries do too!" this alone holds a testament to a life observed

[Sneh]

A kind of holy truth for me....thanks again!