Grace in Gown!

Just thoughts...

Shade of sky,
Enhancing beauty,
As on rose, a butterfly!
Diva's montane grace,
Among all the pretty faces,
Drifted her to the
Princeland!


Orchids everywhere,
Handled with care,
Walking in, holding exquisite
Peace loving white gown,
Adding grace to my crown,
His lips on mine
Blowed the hay
As it was our WEDDING DAY!!

Reviews

[¿]

😌😌😌 am waiting for my day honestly...hoping the tailors won't mess up with my gown :D
Jokes apart, this is a graceful write...that moment would be so glorious and one of the happiest ones to live....glad that you presented this one for us....
Women who've already experienced this can recall that pleasure while girls like us can knit some dreams of our grace in gown!
Thanks so much for sharing this....like I always say, Be blessed :)

[Sneh]

haha, you're all fun ,Tahsin!
BTW same pinch, i too am very curious about that day....till then lets imagine c;
Thank you so much!! love ya..c:

[¿]

You are welcome!!🙇

[Silmara McGarry]

I like that is short but says it all!!! "Adding grace to my crown" ....love this line ;-)!!! Beautiful one!!!
Well done from me!
All best,
Sil :-)

[Sneh]

Thanks sil!
wish you much love and luck :)

[Onlyme]

Amazing images and a warm loving atmosphere felt, within this balanced harmony as well as a romantic piece of a poem.

[Sneh]

Thanks much and appreciate!! 💐

[barleygirl]

Becuz your descriptions are fitting for a wedding, I knew that's where this was going, even before I got to the excitement of your ending. Many young ladies dream of their wedding gowns. There are a number of TV reality shows that feature picking out a wedding gown (just to show how popular this idea is). I wasn't one of these young ladies (I'm 62 & never married). I saw too many bad marriages & divorces, so I could not embrace the delight that so many might feel when in the trappings of a wedding celebration. Even tho it's not my thing, I do feel as if I can understand the excitement better, becuz of the way you tell this story of picking out a wedding dress! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sneh]

Margie you're very kind and genuine person! Thanks for reading this, have a great day ahead! :))💜

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful magic! There is a joy of joys singing through your lines, the scent of flowers, the flow of light on the sweet, sacred day. Amazing vision!

[Sneh]

thanks a ton dear poet....i am glad you liked it.
have a great day! c:

[wordman]

all young women's dreams,a beautiful wedding gown,marry a prince,
becoming a princess...priceless

[Sneh]

Indeed !
Exactly as Cinderella's.....
Thank you so much!
Sneh

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[richieb]

Beautiful poetry Sneh. Your words are as soft and graceful as the wedding gown in your poem.
Blessings,
Richie b.

[Sneh]

Thanks Richie!
Glad you like liked it. :)

[Neville]

Shade of sky
Enhancing beauty
As on rose, a butterfly........

One would be very hard pushed indeed, to find any better words to open such a delightful little poem.... N

[Sneh]

It was indeed bewildering one.. Anyways, extending heartfelt gratitude and appreciate much! 😊

[Neville]

my pleasure entirely...

[Chris Shaw]

Warmth and serenity I got from reading this poem. Uplifting feelings of a bride on her wedding day.Nicely expressed.

Chris

[Sneh]

Thanks much Chris for showing your love!! :)