A ROSE IN HER CLOSET

Some Glimpses of her birthday.

She desired to celebrate rich way,
as it was her 18th Natal day
Dazzled eyes, shimmered dress
Upon it, the best was 'grace'.

All wait was over, as he came closer
Holding each other's hand headed to the venue,
Clapping hands, wishing lips were of no new.

On a sudden, he lifted the rose and revealed to her.
She, giving broad smile on gleeful face,
Thanked her 'Brother' for wonderful remembrance!

Now, she is twenty eight,
managed somehow to keep the Rose in her closet!

Reviews

[moog-drika]

This portrays the situation of most of the people. The more number we add to our age, the more people get subtracted from our life. And the term birthday that used to be the most stirring moment for us, starts to be the most dreary moment. And the only thing we are left with is the rose that symbolizes nothing but those memory that we get from the day. Greatly penned with a very smooth rhythm. Loved it.

[Sneh]

Appreciate the philosophy and wholly agreed to it. Many wishes for your upcoming birthday!!
Sneh

[moog-drika]

aww thanks, it's two months left. :3

[Max Hernz]

This, although simple, speaks in so many words. It's always those little things that we keep in our memory and our hearts for the rest of our lives. Good job, bro.

[Sneh]

Little things does miracle, yes's, now that you liked it, I extend my warmest gratitude! :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful suprises are always the best when least expected and thoughtful - lovely words- sweet and pure🌹

[Sneh]

thanks for another ROSE , i am glad that you liked it....have a blissful day!!

[Abhishek Izy]

Imagery is wonderfully crafted and the “Rose in the closet” invokes a deep subconscious sentiments which communicates the sense of longingness among lot is others things.

Help me understand this, words like “came closer” and ‘brother’ makes me feel that the narrator was termed into being a brother rather than being an actual brother. Would I be completely wrong in that assumption? Help me with your insight please

[Sneh]

came closer in the sense, he moved towards her to escort ...being an actual brother.
i would love to say, its my own story ..age is an exception c;
thanks a lot !!

[Abhishek Izy]

Apologies I took it totally different understanding. My bad. Good write though

[Sneh]

It is absolutely fine.... Glad you stopped by! :)

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Keepsakes, like a time machine, transport us to the treasured moments of life.

[Sneh]

Indeed Precious !🌹
Thanks for the lovely visit Valormore. :)

[Onlyme]

Nicely expressed, about birthdays. Just being a number. And the remainder of her 18th was this rose. The passing of time. Sadly comes to us all.

[Sneh]

A big thankyou for stopping by and sharing deep thoughts!!❤

[Kathy Van Kurin]

A ROSE IN HER CLOSET'
Sneh,
Family is such a wonderful thing; people we know all of our life. This poem seems to be the remembrance, the cherishing of this important relationship between sister and brother. I have two brothers. They are so dear! The rose gives a hint of the gift that this special type of love is. The rose of memories, of the desire to continue to honor and love.
blessings,
Kathy

[Sneh]

Hey Kathy, your thoughts are so pure and lovely!
The best relationship I could say, those wrangles, playfulness, teasings and love is incomparable..
Thanks much for sharing your viewpoint!! ❤ (hugs)
Sneh

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks, I have two sisters and two brothers and many family members; cousins, aunts uncles. Some have died as have others. The memories are my golden ring twirling within my soul. Blessings,
Kathy

[Sneh]

That's great, a giant family all I love! 😇

[Neville]

How very sweet & lovely thought indeed a treasured rose... in verse and prose... N

[Sneh]

Thanking you with a bouquet! :)

[Neville]

bless you my friend.. roses too..

[Crowley]

Sometimes its tokens like that rose, discovered again that can make us thankful for our past and have a definite impact on our future character. This was a wonderful tribute to a brothers token and a wonderfully written poem.

[Sneh]

Yay, tokens of love help us in embracing happiness. Thanks dea Crowley for the read, you're much appreciated!!
Sneh

[KeeD]

This is touching, it derives the value of holding on to something. Memories are precious, sometimes even the best fade away, it's often important to have reminders, triggers to keep the flame going. Good write

[Sneh]

Thanks kee ! Your thoughtful words are appreciated :))

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice ending to the poetry. Good memories are kept with the holding of something precious. Thank you Sneh for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sneh]

Yeah pointed rightly,, appreciate your kind words! Thanks dear coyote.. ☺
Sneh

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Sneh.