LOVE IN THE AIR

Sometimes loving can be so silent that it's vibe talks the loudest. In a mood to emphasize on love this monsoon!

I saw you, you saw me
Waves became harder in the middle sea
Why still the hesitation
Though, corners are jumping high
Besides the excuse of meditation.

I love you, you love me
Words are still shaking
they may have fallen somewhere
For watching you everywhere.

This aura has changed the
thoughts, and buried the words to be spoken
Let both of us fantasize with strong believe which reveals,
'Love is in the air'

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I read this poem because I was eager to know how can one express that famous title..But I must say you penned it really well ...I really liked the way you wrote it..This poem can actually be sung as a beautiful song because of the beautiful rhythm that it has..
Keep writing..

[Sneh]

Thank you Riddhi for an amazing review! 🤗🤗

[Onlyme]

What a glorious spark, aura held within this spellbinding poem of instant attraction from two strangers in a monsoon. Powerful, beautiful and alluring.

[Sneh]

I really wish Dawn to find one quite this way some day! Anyways thank you so much for all the love!
Hugs:)
Sneh

[Onlyme]

Sneh, you are a beautiful soul. In a world of darkness at times. You have a glorious spirit sweetheart. And that special one is out their for you. Don't just rush in. Time will come when your prince charming will come for you. You are only young sweetheart. Lots of time. hugs. Dawn.

[Scott De Buitléi..]

Very interesting, with some great imagery, well done.

[Sneh]

Extending heartfelt gratitude and a Happy New Year! :))

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Many moons ago, I was once in silent love with an Arabian Prince across the seven seas. This poem took me back to that time when love did abound but words betrayed us with there absence! Great poem Sneh!

[Sneh]

Ah, such a silent still vibrant love story Dhara.. Thanks for an exquisite review :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You’re most welcome. I’m glad to be your friend Sneh! 😺

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Love In The Air,
sneh,
The realization of a loved one becoming real is intoxicating. I found this poem one of expressing the joy, the happiness and the feeling of being filled with something new. It is a joy to know that a new thing is happening. Lovely last line:
"This aura has changed the'
thoughts, and buried the words to be spoken
let both of us fantasize with s btrong believe which reveals,
love is in the air'"
Blessings,
Kathy

[Sneh]

Indeed Kathy ,immense joy to know specially when love knocks ..
Thanks and I appreciate your sweet words on my work:))
God bless you!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Your so welcome. Finding joy and then rejoicing is the best!

[Reimyth]

Wow, very well done. I feel as though you nailed the "love at first sight" thing, as well as that emotional stir you feel when you look at a person and you just know "they are the one" before even speaking a word to them. It is a very powerful emotion that can be difficult to put into words, but I feel like this is a very good interpretation of that concept. Well done indeed.

[Sneh]

Yes it's really hard to convey sometimes. Glad you liked it, Thanks dear Reimyth for the read and review!! 😇
Sneh

[Deep]

the way you have written this poem, no doubt, 'love is in the air'. one can dance on the rhythm of the poem. Imageries are attractive, words beautiful. I Like the way you started 1st and 2nd stanza. wonderfully written!

[Sneh]

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback! :)

[wordman]

sounds like love to me,and at first sight

[Sneh]

Yeah! You've almost catched mine intention :)
Thanks wordman !!!
Sneh

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[¿]

Would love to breath in the love stirred air...
But see around for a while...you are breathing that air!
Love stirred air miraculously wipes off the dust of hatred around us....at least I feel ;)
Thanks for this amazing refreshment at this monsoon! :)

[Sneh]

Thank you beautiful!
May the lord shower you with love..happy monsoon 😀
Sneh

[¿]

Same to ya!!
And welcomed warmly :)

[angel]

LOVE IS ALL YOU NEED ~~John Lennon, 1967

[Sneh]

Phoenixlike.. :)
Indeed, love is what every beat wants.
Thanks again deary!
Sneh

[Amada]

But for Delhi it should be like...
sulfur dioxide, carbon monoxide, nitrogen oxides and chemical vapors are in the air of Delhi. 😂

[Sneh]

Haha,, Yes, much deeper :D
(lol)

[Amada]

😜😜😜 Kbhi aap bhi visit krna

[Sneh]

Sure :D...