Mind games!

Yes, something philosophical.

The creation is really small,
But at the same time can make you feel and fall.
The loudest messenger yet no voice,
& the fastest system still want thrive

It is active when thou is practical,
And less active at the time being sentimental.
We all are victims of it,
Can not get released until our death.

Those are lucky having precise mindness
Unlucky are those facing mind games!

Sneh

Reviews

[barleygirl]

You have crafted an unexpected choice expressed like a riddle. Some of your guessing parameters are "out there" (unusual) & I might not be able to figure out what you're describing . . . but in the end I can understand your overall question, as presented in the last two lines. Nice playfulness with the riddle format & provoking your readers to think about the answer to your riddle! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sneh]

Mind is supreme,, master which controls every action of social animal. Anyway, Thanks for the read and amazing review deary!!
((:Hug you back :))

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Conundrums Sneh?

The game of minds.

We fall,
in the most
unexpected moment.

Sudden and enigmatic.

Unable to swim away,
through waves of joy.

Yet etched
by sandbars
most painful.

We teeter,
teeth ajar.

Looking back,
tween treasures
once held near.

[Sneh]

yes valormore, a conundrum....still astonished.

Loving your work here... Thanks for the read and have a great day!
Sneh

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This is inspired by your poem "Mind Games". May be misguided, I was thinking, yours speaks of--- emotional bonds---? Your work is wonderful and deep. Always inspiring. )

[Sneh]

Am very happy, my words could inspire you.. 🌸

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Mind games'
Sneh,
Oh, the mind, oh the complexities of this inner world. Interesting poem you have crafted. It is a theme for everyone as we all have our own thoughts and resulting opinions. Fun to ponder and just enjoy.
blessings,
Kathy

[Sneh]

Hmm, mind creates it's own world of complexities. Thank you, Kathy, for being kind towards my work! 🌸
Love..
Sneh

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sneh,
You are really welcome. Good thoughtful words coming from your own life progression. Is this something that came from an experience or some such?
Kathy

[Sneh]

I was amused to ponder particularly about such small part(mind),which posses the capacity to tackle everything, and of course how it works...
And this way ,thought of penning it down striked me. So I did. :)
Thank you !

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sneh,
The brain is an amazing thing...so complex and wonderful. Thank you for the information I see your point now. You did good! Keep enjoying your writing craft.
Bless you very much.
Kathy