Something About Hate
A Poem by Akira Kodama
Anger inside Hate fills my body Love - it hates me They all hate love I'd give it all to thee
Danger aside My face, my body Daze, to reappear It all comes back Not what I used to see
© 2015 Akira Kodama
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Ok. Can you say all of this without using the words hate or love?
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
No. It wouldn't be the same poem. There is repetition for a reason.
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9 Years Ago
I hear you and I agree. Thing is that 90% of all poems are about hate and love (the other 10% are wa.. read moreI hear you and I agree. Thing is that 90% of all poems are about hate and love (the other 10% are war poems)- So what i'm urging here is to dig deeper and think what is the anger inside? how does it manifest? Where and how does it end- etc.
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9 Years Ago
Alright. Thank you.
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Added on October 3, 2015
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