Dimension Seven

No life.....

Leave me....set yourself free....

Standing in cold water.....

See me, blinded....

Can you feel what I feel?

False warmth....false comfort....

Invade my peripherals....invade my space

Seek me out....throw me away...

Lights blink....on and off....

Insane....not so sane....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. I could feel the madness. Each statement honest and direct. I like the closing line. Most of us dance on insanity and sanity. Just waiting to fall to the true temptation. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Akira Kodama]

Oh I'm glad you enjoyed. Haven't seen you around here for a while. Thanks for coming by.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have been here. I work the retail side of life. No rest for me during the holidays. I'm glad they are gone.

[Akira Kodama]

That's unfortunate.

[Corset]

I don't believe you, I think that the very fact that you get up and tab/walk in here to talk/write about how insane and unfeeling you are is testimony that you want to live and you want something more out of living than the day to day crap you find yourself in, insane? maybe, maybe we all are, maybe we are all beyond the hope, does that mean we lay down and spread 'em? What do you WANT?

[Akira Kodama]

This writing meant nothing yet meant something at the same time. I enjoyed the aggressive review. Don't see many of them, whether or not the interpretation was far off from what I intended or not.

[Corset]

heh, yeah, I might have been yelling at myself :)