I Don't Know.

What the f**k is this anyway?

Don't talk 

Don't look

Don't touch

Don't laugh

Do speak through your eyes

I can see all your lies

Hidden deep within

Asunder I lay, please begin.

Don't let me stop you from your vicious rampage

Tear me down, build me up, but never think to disengage

I die knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing that I died knowing absolutely nothing.

Reviews

[Night]

You have a very unique way of writing poetry, it's certainly very interesting, especially when paired with this particular topic. A lot of angst here, that's for sure, this piece speaks of raw emotions. I enjoyed it, everything from the special format to the poem itself. Keep Writing!

[ANTO]

Knowing that we know nothing is the wisest nugget of knowledge but if we know that (that we know nothing) then we no longer know nothing and are therefore stupid again because we know that.
Intriguing BMC
I think Im a fan ... well anyone who uses Nirvana as a poem image is okay in my books.

[Akira Kodama]

The world is full of paradoxes. The universe is perhaps one as a whole, no?

[Annie]

Your style of chaotic words in your poems is really awesome! It reminds me of profound graffiti that one finds on dark building walls. Bright, intelligent meaning in dark, obscure places

[Frieda P]

Quite a rant here, lots of angst, not sure what to say about all the repetition, it does make an impact so I guess it does work in your favor.

[Sami Khalil]

"Do speak through your eyes

I can see all your lies

Hidden deep within

Asunder I lay, please begin.




Don't let me stop you from your vicious rampage

Tear me down, build me up, but never think to disengage"

I sense the narrator is demanding honesty , does not want disengagement in a relationship , wants her eyes to be truthful in all matters , died knowing nothing or no answers as I take it...Whoa
No insult but I take it as a rant or someone is pissed you off bad...

[Akira Kodama]

Interesting interpretation. Like my other recent stuff this is just tons of random thoughts that all got mashed together into one writing. It has more than one meaning and each is subjective to every reader. Thanks for coming. I hope you enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did as always ...I like your rants and ravings by the way....We need more excitement...:)

[Akira Kodama]

You read my mind.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly...:)