Happy Poem

..They came through the door at 1 A.M.
Men, in bright yellow vests
I stared at them with my lifeless eyes
Without a single breath

...My veins are black, body's cold
Not much different than when I was 'alive'
I'm not sorry it had to end this way
It was finally time.

I sit here in my room
A quick stab of the needle, then I'll be done
-To all who care, or it may concern-
Goodbye to...no one...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A dark write on suicide . I really enjoyed this one . Keep penning dear poet...:)

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you. I shall.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Holly Mason]

like this title caught my attention thanks for the write

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you.

[Monster ^.^]

Void of feelings... yet full of them... It's a great blend that would confuse the emotions. The sarcasm of the title creates more of this confusion. Nice

Is this supposed to be a scene before a death penalty? Correct me if I'm wrong

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you. Actually, I had suicide in mind while writing this. Each stanza is in a different tense, at least slightly. The first two are the "after" tenses, and the last one is the "right before" tense.

[Monster ^.^]

I knew it! That was how I interpreted it at first, thus my question. You really are truly able to show the flow.