Happy Poem

..They came through the door at 1 A.M.
Men, in bright yellow vests
I stared at them with my lifeless eyes
Without a single breath

...My veins are black, body's cold
Not much different than when I was 'alive'
I'm not sorry it had to end this way
It was finally time.

I sit here in my room
A quick stab of the needle, then I'll be done
-To all who care, or it may concern-
Goodbye to...no one...

Reviews

[Shadey Jadey]

Great choice of title Sir, love how it flowed.
Excellent write :)

[Akira Kodama]

It's weird knowing you're dead, Jade. Meh.

[Firestone Feinberg]

Riveting. compelling. original. unique. dynamic. honest. excellent writing. david

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you.

[OTownPete]

Embracing emptiness like a shroud and proceeding into nothingness. Your friend in words, Pete

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you..

[Satan's Daughter]

This poem is in no way happy!!!! The title is quite misleading. Other than that I found it well written, if disturbing. Your imagery and emotion is amazing. The ending gave me chills. Very well done!!!!

[Akira Kodama]

Heh, thank you.

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Very dark and yet riveting. Excellent write!

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Happy to expire, that says a lot....intriguing read. I'm not sure what to say.

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you.

[KeeD]

The suspense of the piece was there, the title was a total detour, I couldn't help but expect the happy part to play in and it never die, cause you were no more. Great write.

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you.

[Em]

Okay, so this was a surprise, the title threw me off.
This is a nice piece.
good work!

[Akira Kodama]

Heh, thank you.

[Em]

Welcome

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

So happy indeed! my kinda happiness
Nice one

[Akira Kodama]

Heh, thank you.

[s y e]

Okay so this was totally not what I was expecting. The title tricked me!
What a dark poem on suicide but nicely written.

[Akira Kodama]

Heh. Thank you.

[s y e]

Welcome. :)