Opium

...

I...

I feel...

Odd

Insides of my skull

Warm

Brain tingling with

Narcotic sedation

I'm kind of itchy

But...I don't want to move

I want to see

Your gorgeous face

Those amazing features

But...my eyes

I can't keep them open

I...

Ah...

Catch me

As I fall

Asleep...

With...you

Right there

...with me.

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

seems half-there, this poem. I'll have to read again, but I almost like that half-there feeling, as if the way the poem is written is like a half-closed eyelid.....

[quinfinn]

sounds like an opium dream to me, and quite nicely captured indeed! i love the casual and staggered format of this write...well done!

[Akira Kodama]

Thank you.

[quinfinn]

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