Giggle

Giggle

A Poem by Snapdragon

Kiss
my lips
make me burn
urgently reach
until my soul giggles and I'm all yours

© 2010 Snapdragon


Author's Note

Snapdragon
This is a Tetractys poem with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10.

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my soul giggles is a lovely phrase ..your writing is beautiful..bright and yet so sublime..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thankfully the structure does not get in the way of the words and what they communicate... Cleverly done and with a sweet pleasure that makes 'giggles' into something more delicious than irritating. I thought the line 'urgently reach' expressed well those feelings of longing and desire.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple, cute but mature. the end made me smile.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I didn't expect it to go there . . .

it's nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting indeed, I hear the sensualness of your words in this poem form that's different then the usual 4 line stanza. Nice job Snapdragon.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was interesting. I never read a poem in this form before but I really like it! It's short but get's the point across beautifully. Nice job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Impressive and interesting form with a well rounded poem. It gives me the impression of someone young and full of life whose desireous aims are just waiting for a response. Nice job Snappy.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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