Giggle

Kiss
my lips
make me burn
urgently reach
until my soul giggles and I'm all yours

Author's Note

This is a Tetractys poem with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10.

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

my soul giggles is a lovely phrase ..your writing is beautiful..bright and yet so sublime..

[Jibey]

Thankfully the structure does not get in the way of the words and what they communicate... Cleverly done and with a sweet pleasure that makes 'giggles' into something more delicious than irritating. I thought the line 'urgently reach' expressed well those feelings of longing and desire.

[Charles Tyson (Just1ne)]

Simple, cute but mature. the end made me smile.

[Emily B]

I didn't expect it to go there . . .

it's nice

[Bare trees]

Interesting indeed, I hear the sensualness of your words in this poem form that's different then the usual 4 line stanza. Nice job Snapdragon.

[Taste of Ink]

This was interesting. I never read a poem in this form before but I really like it! It's short but get's the point across beautifully. Nice job.

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Impressive and interesting form with a well rounded poem. It gives me the impression of someone young and full of life whose desireous aims are just waiting for a response. Nice job Snappy.