Giggle

Giggle

A Poem by Snapdragon

Kiss
my lips
make me burn
urgently reach
until my soul giggles and I'm all yours

© 2010 Snapdragon


Author's Note

Snapdragon
This is a Tetractys poem with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10.

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I rarely undertake to write a poem to a specific form--they for the most part seem rather contrived. This is an exception. Please check out my "Watcher", written for a contest of Helena's, using a form I'd never seen before, called "The Wave Waltz"--she had probably cooked it up especially for the contest, come to think of it!

Posted 14 Years Ago



Making someone laugh is very attractive.

This poem really tickled my fancy.

Well done!
Antonio :))


Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it, I love the words so much :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it. It's beauty is in its simplicity.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is honestly adorable... ive just fallen in love with the idea of a soul being able to giggle :) do carry on writing, your mind is obviously brilliant :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sentimental and sensual.
First time I hear about a Tetractys poem. Interesting form and you've done it justice.

Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is very cute! I should try doing one of these sometime......

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hey, this is pretty cute. I think I'll try it out on the next Heifer I meet.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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