Giggle

Kiss
my lips
make me burn
urgently reach
until my soul giggles and I'm all yours

Author's Note

This is a Tetractys poem with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10.

Reviews

[Mark]

I rarely undertake to write a poem to a specific form--they for the most part seem rather contrived. This is an exception. Please check out my "Watcher", written for a contest of Helena's, using a form I'd never seen before, called "The Wave Waltz"--she had probably cooked it up especially for the contest, come to think of it!

[Antonio Valentino]

Making someone laugh is very attractive.

This poem really tickled my fancy.

Well done!
Antonio :))

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I love it, I love the words so much :)

[Marshall Hanson]

I love it. It's beauty is in its simplicity.

[Chantavong]

Love it.

[mae-mae<3]

:)

[Steve H]

This is honestly adorable... ive just fallen in love with the idea of a soul being able to giggle :) do carry on writing, your mind is obviously brilliant :)

[FlawedByDesign]

Very sentimental and sensual.
First time I hear about a Tetractys poem. Interesting form and you've done it justice.

Nicely done.

[Steve]

this is very cute! I should try doing one of these sometime......

[Brown Bull]

Hey, this is pretty cute. I think I'll try it out on the next Heifer I meet.