Spring Haiku

a spring storm blows in
winds rustle the bright green buds
trees bloom contentment

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little noses twitch
rabbits come out to explore
spring wakes families

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out of the puddle
across the cement desert
now sidewalk jerky

Reviews

omg. jerky. (wonders as scanning the reviews if anyone even noticed)

[nostal]

Calming, write, meant to be taken in slowly, like a small drink of liquid gold.

[Faceless Love]

I feel the serene and peaceful while reading this. Innocence is beautiful in this poem. great write.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Very very nice,and you write with a certain innocence and serenity which passes on to the reader as they read your writes.

[Steve]

you are good at this..... :0)

[FlawedByDesign]

The haikus are great.
Such wonderful reads, but paint a beautiful picture when read in succession like you set it up. Was that a conscious effort?

Well done :)

[Jibey]

I see you have attracted some nice reviews - and hope that you will reciprocate as a member of the Cafe.... There is promise in your writing and these a pleasant examples of haikus... It would be good to know you more

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in your triple Haiku...The last one creatives questions as to what is this that came out of the puddle...Keep the creative pen flowing..Good form and ideas..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sunflower...

[miSS LEaf]

these are lovely haikus, i like them a lot, thank you for reading mine :) ~L

[Taste of Ink]

I really like this. It captures the essence of spring nicely and makes me long for the season! You certainly have a knack for poems. Great job :)