At War' With- Love & Death... Where do you stand

At War' With- Love & Death... Where do you stand

A Poem by Time.

A girl that has more problems than I can ignore,
A girl in which I adore, these feelings make me feel as if I'm at war,
Trapped inside giving myself the grand tour,

Is she the one to fight for?
I am poor, rotten to the core,
So why does she crave more?

She has always been my life rail,
My darling why so pale,
Ever so frail, is this our last tale?

Death is hard, and cold, to much for one to behold... Alone you pray for the dream to begone...... 

© 2011 Time.


Author's Note

Time.
Ignore Grammar And Punctuation. :d

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Love and Death on their own are powerful.. The death of love in itself is so drastic and can be so devastating.. and to wonder about letting it go..or wondering if it's gone is the worst.. Great expression..x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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