Hate' A strong word; Use it well.

A Poem by Time.

A taste of pain, From me you will never gain the SATISFACTION THE GRATIFICATION, of knowing that you hurt me... A life I live deserves more credit then what you give... Must you hate? I cant relate, A feeling I imitate, but why? why do I try? This coldness, Is Ice, Ice to me, Cold wrapping me in its mold, I must fold... Leave my story forever Untold.

© 2011 Time.

Author's Note

This poem is for a deeper then what It may seem.. enjoy and ignore grammar and spelling mistakes.. please enjoy :)

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Victoria PoetryBunny

i loved this last part so much:
"Cold wrapping me in its mold, I must fold... Leave my story forever Untold."
this is quite strong, powerful, nice questions asked, nice meaning and point...
also like how you capitalized and put in bold the 3 words,
the title is good, indeed true about hate... really good.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Lily Mae

Hate is over rated. :) x Shedding hate for love is so much better.. This show's that side of relationships that take us to these dark places.. nice write..x

Posted 13 Years Ago

sarah

This is a very deep poem I really enjoyed this great work

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on June 24, 2011
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Time.

England, B L A N K :), United Kingdom

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I love reading, I write Poems whether you think there good or not there from my heart and soul, each have a purpose to me.. I write things down that happen in my life, it may not be that day or the n.. more..