Hate' A strong word; Use it well.

Hate' A strong word; Use it well.

A Poem by Time.

A taste of pain, From me you will never gain the SATISFACTION THE GRATIFICATION, of knowing that you hurt me... A life I live deserves more credit then what you give... Must you hate? I cant relate, A feeling I imitate, but why? why do I try? This coldness, Is Ice, Ice to me, Cold  wrapping me in its mold, I must fold... Leave my story forever Untold.

© 2011 Time.


Author's Note

Time.
This poem is for a deeper then what It may seem.. enjoy and ignore grammar and spelling mistakes.. please enjoy :)

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wow :) this is really good

Posted 13 Years Ago


I don't know how to hate. I don't understand why some people find it so human to feel that. I really liked it, so keep on writing, and I'll just keep on reading I guess.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You write well...work on the punctation, grammer, and spelling...it's important in order to have great works! You have an older soul...keep writing and getting it out there!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved it and I can indeed truly relate !! great write keep penning !! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
Wonderful and emotional piece!
Putting yourself out there and telling this person you wot stand for mistreatment anymore!
Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really love how much voice you have in all your poems. You really have your own style of writing, and I like it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree to your title. hahaha. Nice write. I liked the rhyme scheme a lot (:


Posted 13 Years Ago


it was very nice, very deep i absolutely loved it [: great rhyming job well done! ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovved ittttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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