Running Pain

I look out ; my past shall it forever last? I see the sun, shall I have fun? Ever stop my internal run... A sad life it may seem, to those outside just a bad dream, who can understand the pain? Will it ever go away? Swept caressly  by the rain into an open drain, silly kids game.. Might it be lame? I know this pain can never be tamed.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tasha]

This was really good. Keep it up!
♥ Ta'Shandra

[misha]

This is really good, keep up the work!

[Nicky Wilson]

Pain is an emotion that we all have to face at one point in our lives and you did a fair job of painting a picture of that but writing can always be improved so keep writing and good job ! :)

[~Lizzy♬]

I love this poem. It speaks for itself. You really are a talented writer, keep it up! :)

~Lizzard~

[Poetic Beauty]

Overcoming the past is a difficult thing to do sometimes, but once we realize that it can on longer hurt us unless we let it, then life becomes more stable. We take back the power.

[Stormy Weather]

Hmmm....well, a lot of people seem to deal by keeping on running with the pain, so it's quite relate-able.

[Pradnya]

good poem, especially the rhyming words























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[Ashli The Amazing]

ha i love reading you're writing [: you do a wonderful job at rhyming i loved it ^_^

[Brianna]

I'm going to kind of relate this to a physical run, because I'm in cross country, and the internal pain you/this person feel/s is similar to the pain I feel when I'm running a race. I love the questions too, they make me think, which is always good :) Great write
~Chey

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

loved this line:
"Swept caressly by the rain into an open drain,"
i like the questions u wrote, very good and thought thinking, the first two on the first line especially. nice write