Steady As A Tree

Steady As A Tree

A Poem by Time.

I am me,
No use for we,
Up Up I grow like the tree,
Strong, and free oh so tall,
Nothing below to break your fall,
Limbs that grow over the wall,
They want stop  untill they reach the top,
Kids grin over there big win...
10 years i've been...
Growing.
Growing.
Growing.

© 2011 Time.


Author's Note

Time.
Please ignore grammar mistakes and spelling, I also like the format..

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Your really good sweetie (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


I only realised after reading it twice the text was shaped like a tree. I enjoy this great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It was interesting !! I got where you were coming from :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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The word "want" should be "won't" but I loved this! The whole idea of it! I like that you actually shaped it like a tree hahaha good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the imagery of this tree. No barriers to hold it down and destroy it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short, but I like the point you made. :) And of course, the format is quite clever.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


i found this... cute in a way. LOL. I also like the format, and yeah. (x


Posted 13 Years Ago


hey this one is really good,nice , short n beautiful :)























emule, utorrent

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha i also like the format... great write(:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 24, 2011
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