Abused Choice Of Right And Wrong

Her  body is sore, Giving all of the signs she can not ignore,

I ask you darling, is it everything you asked for?

I feel a coldness within my core, one in which I can not ignore.

Why must words be so violent? Why must she sit so silent?She must be abused, she is much to bruised, his actions are excused, she is beaten black and blue. can anyone get through?

I weep for her, her welts are deep, dealt undoubtedly with a belt,This girl is in pain,  she has no where to run she cant say she's done,Alone, a child this case may seem mild? That man is grown his  story well known.   

Save her, A slave to pain how her blood rains, one of his gains,In his hand he holds a rein, to her emotional chain. Everything to gain, everything to loose.

 what did she choose? No one knows

Author's Note

Forgive grammar or spelling errors, or the format style I like it this way.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

aww wow...
such emotion in this,
i loved the emotion in this part:
"Why must words be so violent? Why must she sit so silent?She must be abused, she is much to bruised,"
loved the rhyming, you fit the words well with the pain, like you did here:
"holds a rein, to her emotional chain."
The questions in this make it so much more powerful, sad and painful i think.
Really great write.

[stars are far]

great write

[Pradnya]

format style is k, a poet should express his/ her feelings through the words thats what matters, this poem is really good full of emotions, but full of pain, thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.





















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[Omar Fendri]

deeply emotive and goes straight to the heart. The despondency is blatant here speaking out in every line with a touch of compassion. The last stanza is a dejection and heartfelt. I love it and I love its style.

[Stormy Weather]

Oh wow.....that's intense.

[TJ]

Such a dark and sad piece...there is little pity to be had for those that tolerate abuse, but for those who are trapped...my heart bleeds for them