Sweet With A Bitter End

Love is in the air,

blowing through her hair,

she shouts she has nothing to wear,

that is her problem to bear,

I believe she should go bare,

let the people stare, but

we must play fair.

 

The sun is out to play,

I wish we could stay,

This way, for more then a day,

I must lay down, look around,

and let my mind wonder under,

the sun, a day full of fun.

 

It was gone in an instant, things were different,

The rain has come, to the call of a drum,

who knows where from? Night is falling, fast

leaving us with our memorys of the past, say goodbye to the light, and hello to our endless fight. I know it will never be quite alright, despite her sweet invite to her sweet laugh of delight.

 

 

Author's Note

Forgive Any Grammar/Spelling Mistakes

Reviews

[Babieegirl]

beautiful write. Loved how the first stanza drew me in. (=

[Helpless]

beautiful and captivating james! simply beautiful!

[WordNerd]

Excellent poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great piece of poetry here mate :)

Love the last paragraph/ending.