Broke With Rough Edges

Broke With Rough Edges

A Poem by Time.
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A poem describing how it feels when your pushed to your very edge and then you fall.

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Who I am, what I am, would be broken, I'm so glad you get to see your token, you've finally awoken to see me trapped, tied down broken. You tied me down, you laughed at me like a clown, now I'm known all over town, pick up your crown, I'm broken, broken, broken.. Take your final bow, I'm broken

© 2011 Time.


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Time.
Please ignore any grammar mistakes, but do correct spelling. Tell me how you would write it or to make it better. :) enjoy

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Love it. Job well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this is a very relateable write.. Most have been broken a time or two and you've expressed that well here..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very nicely expressed, i can feel the hurt....like the rhyme scheme

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Added on May 29, 2011
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