What Goes Up Must Come Down

So tell me friend

Why have you come here again

To give me pain

To give me glory

To give me shame

Or to make me worry

Why are you hurting me

So you could just  go and flea

I see ,

So what are you trying to do

Make me one of your stepping stones

Well that's not how it goes in life

You'll just have to strive for your own rights

Well we'll just keep spinning round and round

'Cause what goes up must come down

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I love how you put the last line of the poem, its killer and also very true. I like the style of this poem very much! :)

[Gia]

Thank you very much for the review! And I like how you like the poem! =)

[Shari Vaudo]

This is a very nice poem, Gia. We should all remember that...in every aspect of life, what goes up, must come down. I also like that you write poems, stories, chapters, etc. That's talent.

[Gia]

Thank you very much! I like that think that about my writing! =)