Epic Fantasy Battle

A strange writing style but I enjoyed writing this as I imagined it inside my head as I listened to a varitey of dub step, heavy metal music.

A kid is playing on his laptop. His laptop shuts off. Steam rises from his hands, as he flips his hands over. He holds them out in front of his face, steam rising from his hot blue palms. A strange electric energy stirs about from his palms like smoke up towards his forearms. Like the moonlight swallowing the sunlight, the smoke devoured his skin. Before he knew it both of his arms became engolfed in a thick black smoke. A strange aura of darkness blazed from his eyes. He was much taller now, A warrior. He roared! A GODLY ROAR SENT THE ENTIRE BUILDING ABOVE HIM EXPLODE. He was 8"feet tall and ready to take on the world. A desolate black wasteland surronded the warrior. An enormous explosion occoured to the left of the warrior, red acid. A strange figure stood above the glowing red ichor. An abomination of a strange red slimy stench of a somewhat human shape. A few seconds, then drop. THE FIGHT BEGINS. THE WARRIOR IN FLIGHT TOWARDS THE ABOMINATION. Abomination throws ichor out of left wrist shooting for the warriors face, the warrior punching the acid turning it into black thick smoke. The warrior smiles. Two hooks to the head and body from the warrior until the abomination howls and slips underneath the warrior, completely devouring the warrior as he grows larger to swallow the warrior. The warrior jumps and slams hands together and then, SHOCKWAVE! A THICK RING OF SMOKE EXLPODING FROM THE TWO COMPATENTS. Pieces of red slime covered the dark empty wasteland. Only the warrior still standing. He looks up, then a radiant yellow hole rips in the thick black clouds, the warrior screams, 

 "GET READY TO EAT THE FIRE!" almost as if he mean't to threaten the gods. A yellows charge began to form in the hole. Then, a yellow bolt strikes towards the warrior knocking him back at an unbelievable speed. He looked up from the ground, 

"No, it can't be." The Yellow God began to descend from the hole on a yellow aura cloud. He reaches the ground grinning slowly walking towards the warrior injured on the ground. The warrior begins to gasp for air, then spoke, 

"I trained to defeat you. I destroyed Hades. I ascended the Gods." "We come from very different worlds, friend." The yellow figure begins to raise his arms, until his hands faced the sky, reaching for power. Enormous spikes rose out of the earth around the warrior caging him inside of a yellow prison. The yellow Gaurdian smiles. Goodbye. LIGHT FLASHES as only ashes remain inside of the cage.

And that is all I can remember.

Author's Note

The writing is far different from anything I have ever done, I tried to write it right as I imagined it inside of my mind. This is the end result.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It started real well till it got to this part "Steam rises from his hands" when realized it was psyfi writing, at first when reading thought it was going to be, Steam rises from his head, something like a spirit.

For writing it at the speed of thought is excellent not many persons could do that, you should be proud of yourself.