Saying goodbye....

Just how i feel now and well it about family

Empty and lonely down on my luck.

Why does my life just have to suck?

I'm actually crying i feel so out of place.

But my emotions are numb clear as my face.

 

To be closer to loved ones never let them go.

Saying goodbye is my all time low.

I'm sat here pouring words out of my head.

When my heart inside simply seems dead.

 

The tears that i shed on the day i said goodbye.

I'm still hurting from that what i told was a lie.

Seeing my dad pull away seeing my mum go in.

Driving away felt like the worst possible sin.

 

Saying goodbye has got to be the worst part of all.

The last day my heart seems to fall.

Back in my tiny room small like a box.

I want to be out of this godridden box.

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So sadly moving, reaching so deep inside you... the distance... the pain... the loss that goodbye leads to... You write so profoundly of the ache of being away from those you love.... amazing words...

[Orlando Murcia]

Very heart felt and emotional
Yet personal and sad

Great write though

Thanks for sharing

Orlando M