Little Snow Fairies!

Something i wrote at 4am sat watching the snow!

Dancing little white fairies in the cold winters breeze.

So elegant their kiss their desire to freeze.

Dancing on the wind thousands will tell.

A little bit of heaven little bit of hell.

There spell has been cast whiteness is spread.

All of them each singerly lead.

Falling so elegantly on a sparkly bed.

So beautiful divine on the bed of pearls.

On their path of unknowing which bends and curls.

Lay their sleeping until death is their matter at hand.

Now fairies lay melting giving colours back to the land.

Until the next time when their spell is cast.

Not knowing when or how long it will last. 

Author's Note

Sorry for mistakes haven't written in a while on here.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

its very cute n sweet... :) lovely theme to write upon.. quiet creative! :)

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

P.S. i loved the picture and title....

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and brilliant! Love the sensation of seeing the snow fall, and to have it come alive like this is amazing!!!!!!!!!! Oh, thank you for writing again... :)

[Dalaina Renee]

Snow is always beautiful to whatch. Cute poem!

[Jennifer May]

You have some grammar and spelling errors, so that could some editing.
I like how it's very lively, and you've added imagination to an ordinary snowy scene :) It's pretty strong, too. There are some parts where it doesn't seem to "flow", but that's just me. I'm not really a "poem" person, so I can't give constructive criticism =(
I enjoyed reading this, though. Good job =)