The Blank Canvas!

The Blank Canvas!

A Poem by Gema
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Just what i saw on an advert and made me think lol =)

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Weather scorching ice caps melting.
Hurricane wind storms are belting.
People dead or soon to die.
Because of us why why?
 
Greed of money to burn oil.
But soon wiped out our plan to soil.
Green house gases Co 2
Animals were killing I can name a few.
 
Rain in July Heat in October.
Like a whirlpool when your sober.
Hurricanes soaring earthquakes collapsing.
Like an addiction again relapsing.
 
But to start again a clean white sheet.
But to mould it not to repeat.
A clean clear canvas to build and draw.
Not with a single flaw.
 
The blank canvas to colour to our liking.
Bold and beautiful bright and striking.
Summer in December June in fall.
Whatever, it's our call.
 
A clean white sheet a fresh start.
For the new generation we give our heart.
Take care of it like we did for you.
Maybe one day it will help others through!

© 2008 Gema


Author's Note

Gema
Sorry 4 any mistakes =)

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This was way cool!!!! I love the colors too.
made it look like you were trying to express
yourself through it......=)
It might of been kind of dark but I love the dark
side they have lots of cookies......lol.
Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


Amazing poem gem

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem Gema. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gema, well done in form and words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it =] strongly written and to the point

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a powerful, beautiful challenge to us all!!! Stark in places, yet so hopeful that we can make the world a better place if we only wish to do so... :)

Craig

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 31, 2008

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Gema
Gema

South Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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Hello, Gema here. I've written since I don't know when, it vaires and can be very mood driven. I am a huge marvel fan, enjoy the supernatural and mythology in general. I am also a huge lover o.. more..

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