Daughter of darkness!

Based on my book i am looking at by L.J Smith but my own words =)

Daughter of darkness so white so pale.

You long black hair so thin so vale.

Your lips red as the blood you suck.

A beginner not knowing how much you took.

 

Your long green robe like a leaf in the wind.

Knowing your whole life you've always sinned.

Green shiny shimmering eyes that let out a glare.

You stop there still dead and stare.

 

You skin so soft like a new born child.

You were born so perfect but now are wild.

Your darkness that shines through.

But no one ever seems to have a clue.

 

Those shiny white pearl droplets of which are teeth.

Which could rip through a human like raw beef.

Like daggers to the mouth, poisonous like a dart.

Take to much dead straight from the heart.

 

This dark wild child having such fun.

Doesn't know what she's just begun.

Killing so violently but still a beginner.

Will she change herself or be the worlds worst sinner?

Author's Note

Sorry for my mistakes xxx

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So dark and smooth! Excellent poem, and I love the imagery and vividness with which you write!

Craig

[S.J.Floreen]

There were a few grammatical errors, but I really liked the descriptiveness of this poem. You can almost see the daughter of darkness.