Driving so fast!

Feelings and thoughts in my head!!

Driving so fast hardly feel my breath.

Knowing my reaction this could be my death.

Faster and faster th world now at a dream.

Only the lights seeming to gleam.

 

Tires so fast my anger so strong.

Not understanding my anger lasting this long.

Stiring the wheel my reactions slower.

My eyes seeming tired seeming to lower.

 

I brake so fast i can't take no more.

I stop on the side and i open the door.

So weak and so brittle i fall to the floor.

Leaving the car and the wide open door.

 

Left under the street light alone and in harm.

My face so pale but still looking calm.

Feeling the ache in my side.

Now awake i have no where to hide.

 

The pain gushes overpowering my mind.

Hearing a noise trying to look behind.

I slip once again unconsious and still.

Knocked out like taking one huge sleeping pill.

Author's Note

Sorry for mistakes!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Very powerful and intense! Loved the expressions and thoughts flowing so perfectly down the page. Incredible write!

Craig

[Lia]

Wow, a very powerful and strong piece. Great poem! Thanks for sharing xx